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-[The New Genesis]- -[Comments/Applications]-

Discussion in 'Roleplay' started by Dodger546, Mar 28, 2014.

-[The New Genesis]- -[Comments/Applications]- | Page 7
  1. mineeli Regular Member

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    The ending was definitely a little creepy, but it was good.

  2. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    How was it creepy? :lmao:
  3. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    I will teach you Dodger, I will teach you the ways of the force AND speed scrolling. (Need to do it from my computer though. )

    Come my young padawan
  4. mineeli Regular Member

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    "Goodnight Daddy." Just seemed so creepy all alone like that at the end of the chapter.
  5. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    It has a massive meaning later on. Trust me, you will understand when it happens.
  6. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    Now all chapters have a quick link to them, along with anymore to come. Scrolling reduced to a bare minimum. Also, Tablet users will be able to easily navigate :D
  7. mineeli Regular Member

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    Whens the next chapter?
  8. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    I was away for two weeks. I'll return back and upload tomorrow my time. I'm tired and exhausted, so hopefully this next chapter is almost done when I look at it.
  9. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    No chapter?
  10. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    I was restarting my YT I is sorry ;(
  11. XDGrangerDX Gold

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    I guess this is dead? :c
  12. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    Yes. I shall discontinue this and work on something else. I needed a serious break from everything. Like literally everything. I might rehase this if I so please, but right now it shall remain docile. Until either a Shotbow Forums update happens, or I feel like I want to, The New Genesis will come back alive.

    However, Dodger's series may very well start up again.
  13. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    If I was to restart the Dodger series, it would have Alpha Omega being rehased and re-edited. That would mean the original threads are dead, new threads would be made. And from the looks of things, Pyros and Dark have got during the outbreak down fair and square. I think I would have it before Dodger met back up with Dezerath, and afterwards to compile Dodger's perspective during the outbreak. Plus, there is an interesting twist that I never did finish, and of which I've been wanting to finish. Stay tuned everyone!
  14. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    It would be great to have that up and running again. And a re-edit as well; what kinds of edits? Would they by typical grammar and structure edits or some story/lore refinements?
    Glad you're back. I hope this story will continue as well in time.
  15. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    Full revisit. Basic plot of it was really good, I liked it, but the point was weak. Along with the beginning. Really did not like its beginning, so its that type of redo. Basic points and plot still there, entire lore, story and grammar edits within. Consider it like an anniversary edition for a video game. Everything remade, still the basic core.
  16. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    NEW CHAPTER PULHEZE!
  17. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    I'm working on the revise! Calm yo tits!
  18. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Of this story?
  19. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    My Dodger Series
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  20. mrnutty12 Platinum

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    There are not enough words in the English language that can describe the joy I feel when I read this...

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