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MineZ So many Zombies... So Little Time (Comment section)

Discussion in 'Roleplay' started by Ole_Byzantine, Dec 26, 2014.

MineZ - So many Zombies... So Little Time (Comment section)
  1. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    Hey... yeah, I finally put my story into the 'regular' format. So if you want to comment about the story or make a character (It's about guaranteed to get added) you can leave that here.
    Don't really mind the format too much.
    Also, if anyone has already read it, I edited all the chapters so you could tell me if it's better or not or... any other opinion you have. Feel free to yell at me!

    Point aside, here's the story! :stuck_out_tongue: Story thread: http://shotbow.net/forum/threads/280474/

  2. SnowblindGhost Emerald

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  3. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    Oke, not really gonna... help much unless you specify what you're confused about.
  4. SnowblindGhost Emerald

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    Haven't you already made a story on this? Or are you just making it nice and tidy by fitting all parts into one thread?
  5. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    Thanks for reorganizing this. I will probably reread your story sometime today.
  6. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    I just wanted to 'tidy it up' I was very unsatisfied with the clunky layout I had it in.
  7. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    Check Chapter 21, part of it seems to repeat in the end.
  8. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    Alright, thanks. It's fixed, I really should have read it a third time.
    SnowblindGhost likes this.
  9. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    New chapter up, it was horrendously boring to edit so forgive me if some parts are confusing or don't make sense.
    Anyway, I had to split it into two parts due to it not being post-able initially.

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