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MineZ Chapter 1: An Uncalculated Mistake

Discussion in 'Roleplay' started by Pyrosfyre, May 2, 2013.

MineZ - Chapter 1: An Uncalculated Mistake | Page 20
  1. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Over all for those who have loyaly followed the story chapter by chapter I would like a review on my writing of things that I can do better in my next novel. Things that I should keep doing and things that I need to do better.

    And thank you nutty for those kind words.

    And why are you dissatisfied Dodger?

  2. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    I thought there would be a big battle :( Finale sounds so GRAND
  3. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    There was a big battle... Did you not read it all? A battle between Crimson and Agni
  4. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    I don't think I saw it. I might've missed it.
  5. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    *Clap* Well done. Good story. I would read the whole thing again from beginning to end. And I may have to to see if I missed anything and/or put the pieces closer together.
  6. Holdenm1244 Gold

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    I finally got to reading the rest and i must say, Dude i love you *No homo*, You turned my character into a complete badass that happened to be a nod to the lord of the rings. Even though he died right at the end you turned him into something i couldn't have imagined and I love you for that

    Dracul Btw
  7. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Thanks, I appreciate that
  8. Dodger546 Regular Member

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    Can't believe this story still lives :lmao:

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