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MineZ Chapter 1: An Uncalculated Mistake

Discussion in 'Roleplay' started by Pyrosfyre, May 2, 2013.

MineZ - Chapter 1: An Uncalculated Mistake
  1. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    I have divided the story in three threads.

    This is the Comment thread.



    Please post your comments about the story here.

    The story is located at this link:
    http://shotbow.net/forum/threads/18994/

    The Application thread is at this link: If you want to be in the story go here. I need the apps to continue.
    http://shotbow.net/forum/threads/18991/


    Please feel free to comment about the story I really love the feedback.

  2. EspyEra Platinum

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    Very very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
  3. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    I would be happy to make another chapter, but here my character starts meeting people and I dont want them all to me mine. If you want to speed up the process you could submit a character. :D
    the format should look like this.

    Name
    Gender
    Occupation/role
    Items
    Skills
    short background
    misc info

    Items and skills don't have to be filled out but it would make it easier for me. thanks all.
  4. Ciphon Silver

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    please don't say you are going to make a thread for each chapter...
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  5. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    no i am going to edit each time I add a section. only one thred

    at least for the story itself
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  6. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    Interesting, the only thing I don't like is the reference to 'Blocks' other than that I like it
  7. Ciphon Silver

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    Just curious because the title of the thread begins with "Chapter 1" :stuck_out_tongue:
  8. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Please comment. Tell me what you think. Any suggestions? I love the feedback.
  9. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    I have altered the system and posted a new chapter. Please comment on what you think. Chapter 3 coming soon.
  10. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    I have pre written chapter 3 and 4, and chapter 5 is done with drafting. Im stuck at chapter six though because I dont have any applications. I cant continue past 6 without apps PLEASE APPLY thanks.
    Chapter 3 should be out today or tomorrow.
  11. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Chapter 3 has been released. Please tell me what you think.
  12. Ole_Byzantine Platinum

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    Very, very interesting. I love the details of it. I also like how the objective of your character is very clear and is easy (For me atleast) To follow the story line.
  13. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    I like how this story begins the zed-apocalypse at the wizard's tower. A task has been made for the character but another enemy has left something of notice. Unless you have an idea for that antagonist, here is an application for that character:
    Name: The Dark Apostle (keeps his true identity a secret)
    Gender: Male
    Occupation/role: Warrior priest of Agni; is hunting for the scepter as well.
    Items: Iron armour, shotbow (plus arrows), Agni's rage, smite 2 knockback sword, food, health potions, bandages, antidote, and only one grenade.
    Skills: Cunning schemer and skilled swordsman.
    Background: Leads a cult of Agni called Catalyst. With their help, he received the shotbow and Agni's rage as symbols of his power. Becoming power hungry afterwards, he discovered the scepter's existance and foreknowledge of the zed-apocalypse and had the ambition to hunt for the scepter and become the harbinger of the coming terror.
    Misc Info: Overzealous but seemingly heretical due to his evil ambition.
  14. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Thanks i will consider it. Please remember there is an apps section. :)
  15. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Chapter 4 has been released
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  16. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Chapter 5 is now available. Please comment and tell me what you think. Also applications are appreciated.
  17. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    You put chapter 5 twice on the story thread. Not the actual chapter but its title. Anyways, getting intense, the world gone mad.
  18. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Yea kinda figured that out. Just diddnt have time to fix it till now.
  19. Pyrosfyre Silver

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    Chapter 6 is released.
    Thanks to the Dark Apostle for making this one possible.

    This was a fun chapter to write.
  20. InquisitorEslaf Regular Member

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    You're welcome. Thank you for my spooky entrance.

    Also, is "Ready, Fire, Aim" a typo?

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