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MineZ Freedom Chapters

Discussion in 'Roleplay' started by Ilikebubba, Jun 3, 2013.

MineZ - Freedom Chapters
  1. small_arabian Emerald

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    My first story about MineZ, tell me what I should work on and help to improve my story!
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    Chapter 1: "Trouble in Romero"
    "Tuck? Is that you?"
    My eyes opened slowly. I felt the sun on my arms. Everything was still. My cap was missing and my armor was severely damaged. I felt a sharp pain in my left arm. It was bloody, but I could push through the pain. I stood up, observing my surroundings. I was in a grassy area, with a lighthouse near. To my right, I say a long bridge, made of stone bricks. It extended across a body of water.
    A small breeze was passing over my shoulders, gently blowing my hair.
    I searched around for anything that could stop the bleeding on my arm. I saw a bandage, luckily, a stone sword, and a grappling hook. I dug around in the sand, scavenging for anything that could be usable. I felt something like a bottle, and dug it out. I picked up a water bottle and it was full of sand.
    I went to the edge of the island to clean out my bottle.
    Thinking to myself, I suppose I should find somewhere I could mend my arm, as the bandage I used isn't the best thing I could use.
    Then, out of nowhere, I here groaning.
    Looking around, I spot a figure's body, half of it poking out of the lighthouse's entrance.
    I hear a swishing noise, and the figure falls dead.
    I yelled, "What did you do to him!? He clearly needed help!"
    A deep voice boomed, "What do you think, I would let an infected bite me?"
    I walked slowly to the lighthouse, and the person who responded appeared.
    He was muscular and tanned, wearing leather armor, and had some goggles over his eyes, stained with dried blood.
    "What do you mean 'infected'?"
    "Have you been under a rock? I suppose so."
    "What has happened? What do you mean?"
    "Let me tell you."
    "Well, it started near Bazel, at an archaeological dig site. Scientist Zachary Bua and Dreamer."
    "Dreamer? What is his last name?"
    "No one knows. Back to the story. Zachary and Dreamer dug deep down and they found a corpse."
    "Scary" I replied.
    "Dreamer touched the corpse and suddenly, the corpse made a sudden movement and bit him."
    "You mean, they found a zombie..?"
    "Yes".
    "Is there anything to the story?"
    "Dreamer was infected and chased Zachary down to Bazel, where Zach found a sword.
    Dreamer was slain."
    Swish.
    Blood spilled through my tunic.
    "You'll be dead soon" said the person.
    "Why-y would yo-you do this?"
    "I'm taking you with me, the bandits will be pleased."
    "H-huh?"
    "Sacrifice to Agni, the fire god!"
    He chained my hands, and took me uphill. I saw walls looming over the grass. He took me into the entrance.
    "Welcome to Romero".
    We walked straight, and I felt weak. The cut stained my tunic with blood. We took a right and then a left to the church.
    "These are the bandits" said the person.
    The bandit looked up.
    "Another sacrifice Keith?"
    "Yes Shaun" said Keith.
    "Very well" said Shaun.
    Several bandits appeared behind us.
    "Seth, Mark, and Charlotte, we have another sacrifice" said Shaun.
    Seth looked pale, but he could weasel out of anything. He wore chain armor, with an enchanted iron sword.
    Mark was tanned like Keith, and wore chain as well. He looked like the heavy hitter, and wasn't afraid of the infected.
    Charlotte was beautiful, brown hair and blue eyes. She wore iron armor like Shaun. She had food tied to her hips and had a bow.
    Shaun, leader of the group. He had iron armor with a diamond sword. Health Potions tied his body. He was scary, and looked like siblings with Charlotte.
    I spotted a person in the back of the room, tied to a chair. He was pale and bloody.
    "Meet your friend in your doom" Shaun said, pointing to the person tied on the chair.
    Keith tied me to a chair and Shaun explained what was happening.
    "We are going North. Very far North."
    The three bandits left, leaving Shaun, the other tied up person, and me.
    "You two stay here. Or I will hunt you down."
    He left leaving us two.
    "Psst" said the other.
    "Huh?"
    "How'd you get caught?"
    "I washed up on shore, with a cut on my arm. I met Keith, he told me a story, and sliced me."
    "You were lucky."
    "How so?"
    "They found me, I was taking some of their supplies, I didn't know."
    "Go on".
    "They tortured me, craving symbols of Agni on me. They put a liquid on me and it burned."
    The three bandits came back with supplies and went to pack more. I spotted a sharp object to my right. It was a glass shard.
    "We can get out" I said.
    "How?"
    "I can cut the ropes."
    I moved my chair slowly to it, barley picking it up, and slowly cutting my ropes.
    I cut them and cut my hand. My wrists felt better, but my right hand was bleeding.
    Slowly, trying not to make noise, I cut his ropes.
    "Thanks, my name is Rei, but some people call me Pistachio for some reason."
    We crept carefully to the supplies.
    I opened it and there was a set of chain and iron armor along with some swords.
    Rei opened the second one, it had packs of food to sustain us if we escape, and lots of Health Potions.
    I poured some in my mouth and my cuts instantly healed up.
    Rei scarfed down some cookies for food.
    I asked him if he was a good fighter and he said he is excellent.
    I gave him the iron armor and the better sword.
    I put on the chain, grabbed an iron sword, and any supplies vital to our survival.
    "What do you think you are doing?"
    Shaun appeared with his fellow bandits.
    "RUN!" I shouted.
    Rei and I crashed through a window and booked it.
    We exited Romero, with the bandits behind us, coming fast.
    Charlotte, the one with the bow knocked an arrow and shot it.
    I nearly got my head shot off.
    Mark drank something blue, and was running even faster, catching up. I swung my sword and I hit his chestplate. It made a "Clank!" sound.
    Rei got closer to me, and we both swung at Mark.
    Swish. Swish.
    I heard a "thud" and looked back, Mark down, bleeding badly.
    Charlotte knocked an arrow once again, and it hit my armor, and fell off.
    "After them! Avenge Mark!" bellowed Shaun.
    Keith was the closet to us, but I had an idea.
    I kept running, stopped dead, and swung.
    Keith, throat bleeding, gasping for air, collapsed.
    Shaun, Charlotte, and Seth running close together, trying to catch up, but gave up, knowing it was useless.
    We out ran them.
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    Chapter 2: "Dead End"
    Rei and I ended up in Carmi, a town that we came across after traveling on the bridge.
    "Lots of people here..." Rei said.
    "I know, do we dare help?"
    "Maybe."
    "I could tell them about what has happ-"
    "Shush" Rei said quietly.
    A clan walked by, five people armed in rare gear, six prisoners.
    "We should help" I whispered.
    "Okay, it will be hard, put we could take them out, two are injured."
    Silently, we crept toward them.
    "I'll knock an arrow, shoot it at a tree, distract them, you take one out" Rei whispered.
    I crept toward once again.
    Ping.
    The arrow was shot.
    They looked.
    I grabbed the nearest bandit, slit his throat, stabbed him for good measure, and drug his body took Rei.
    The bandits still looked for where the arrow came from.
    "Nick?"
    "Yes?" said the bandit called Nick.
    "Tim is missing."
    Nick looked around.
    "Find him!"
    They walked around, and I drug the body closer to Rei.
    We looted Tim, acquiring some loot, and a better sword for me, and iron.
    "Ok, I think we could take them now".
    "Kay" said Rei.
    We burst out taking the bandits by suprise.
    I got in a close quarters fight with two bandits, slicing one of them, his head gone.
    The other one got me good, but I drank a health pot, healing myself.
    Swish!
    Other bandit dead.
    The leader was fighting with Rei, and I came and side railed him.
    He was bloody, on the ground, and with one final blow from Rei, he died.
    A prisoner thanked us, and we said take whatever.
    Rei sliced the bandit's head so they wouldn't reanimate.
    We slept in the tower, having the prisoners free others trapped, and inhabiting the town once more.
    Rei and I slept in the tower.
    I woke up the next day. Rei got up before me, and prepared food.
    We decided to tell the town of Carmi of the events we witnessed, preparing them for bandit attacks.
    Rei said we did a good job, and he decided we go to other places to help other towns.
    We need to help Romero, but Shaun and Charlotte are still there, probably regrouping with other bandits, ready to strike.
    The town of Carmi named us "Protectors".
    Rei said, "To the bridge, once more."
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    Chapter 3: "P for Payback."
    Shaun was sharpening his sword, making it seem more deadly.
    Seth prepared the arrows for others so the hits were dangerous.
    Charlotte was cooking delicious smelling food.
    There were three of them, plotting payback for what happened to Mark and Keith.
    "Raplhie?" said Shaun.
    A bandit appeared, red hair, skinny, tanned, and small.
    "Shaun?"
    "Are the others ready?"
    "Yes sir".
    "Good."
    Five more bandits appeared.
    "Wolf, Kilo, Nate, Jake, and Johnny" said Shaun, listing from the left to the right.
    "Yes?" they all said in unison.
    "Time to go and get payback".

    ...

    "To Romero eh?" said Rei.
    "Yes" I replied.
    We've gone to free the city of Romero, from the clutches of Shaun, and others.
    Thinking about what will happen. We'll free them. I'll fi-
    "AGH!"
    "Wh-"
    "Zombie Horde!"
    "Where?"
    "Just a test" Rei said. "Testing your reflexes."
    "Ugh, had me scared."
    We walked on the long bridge for awhile until we came to a halt.
    "What?"
    "Look" Rei whispered.
    I looked and saw it.
    Zombie Keith and Zombie Mark.
    "We take 'em out?"
    "Maybe".
    "Maybe?"
    "Look farther."
    I squinted to see farther. More zombies.
    "We can't get past them" I said.
    "Not unless we swim."
    "Uh..."
    But Rei already pushed me.
    Splash.
    "What was that for?!"
    Another splash.
    "So we didn't get caught. Look."
    Zombies looked down from the bridge, where we jumped from.
    "Ugh. Well we better get hea-"
    Splash.
    "Zombie!"
    "Swim!"
    Swimming through the water, heading towards to Romero, we were getting chased by a zombie.
    I couldn't get my bow out to kill it.
    It kept getting closer.
    Splash.


    ...

    Leaving Romero. Come back soon!
    Shaun and his fellow bandits were walking, on the bridge, to Carmi.
    "You know, I haven't seen a zombie today" said Charlotte casually.
    "Lucky?" questioned Ralphie.
    "Maybe" said Shaun.
    Ralphie had a romantic connection with Charlotte when he first laid eyes on here.
    He wanted her. He wanted to protect her. He wanted to escape the world with her.
    "The weather is good, eh?" said Ralphie.
    "Yeah, a good day to swim" replied Charlotte.
    "Kilo?" said Johnny.
    "Yes?" she said.
    "Got any nuts I could snack on?"
    "Yeah, here" taking some brown nuts.
    The water waved, the air just right, no clouds, making it a perfect day.
    "Guys!" exclaimed Seth.
    "What?" questioned Shaun.
    "Look."
    Two people were swimming wearily from two zombies in the water.
    "Rei and the other" said Wolf.
    "Get the bows ready."
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    Chapter 4: "I and L for Indeed Love"
    Ping. Ping. Ping.
    Three arrows flying, coming out of nowhere. Two hit one zombie, the other flew in the water.
    "Keep going!" Rei shouted over the zombie's groans.
    A horde of arrows came, hitting myself, Rei, the zombie, me again.
    I shuddered, the arrows didn't feel right. There was some sort of venom in it.
    "The arrows... have a sle..eping medi...cine dripped on the... tip" said Rei, sleepily.
    "Wake up!" I shouted.
    "Okay! Okay!"
    "Duck!"
    Arrows nearly hit my head.
    Land was near.
    My eyes were sleepy.
    I was close to land...
    So close...

    ...

    "Shaun, we found Rei, but not the other" Wolf said.
    "Good, good" Shaun replied.
    "Are we still taking him to the Sacrifice pit?" Charlotte questioned.
    "Yes" replied Seth.
    "The other deserves to die, for what he did to my brothers, the other..."
    Ralphie's voice trailed off.
    Charlotte comforted him, but Ralphie stormed off, on the brink of tears.
    "Charlotte, find Ralphie" Kilo whispered. "I want him alright, and he likes you."
    Charlotte blushed, and set off to find him.
    "Ralphie? Ralphie!?" Charlotte called. "Ralphie! There you are!"
    "By Agni, what did I deserve for this, loosing my brothers..." Ralphie muttered.
    "It's okay Ralphie, we'll kill the other one."
    "How..? He ki-killed my brothers..."
    "He'll come for Rei."
    "You think s-so?"
    "I'm positive."
    Ralphie felt better, and hugged Charlotte. Hoping to not let Ralphie see her blush, she scurried off.
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    Chapter 5: "E for Evaded"

    "No, no, no!"
    "How could I let this happen..."
    Rei gone, I stranded, crawled up in a shelter on the side of Romero.
    I evaded the bandits...
    I left Rei...
    I could of saved him...
    He told me to save myself.
    I plan to get in Romero before they leave and rescue Rei.

    ...

    "Time for torture" said Shaun.
    "No!" exclaimed Rei. "Nev-"
    "AGGGHHH"
    "You'll pay."
    Steam came off of Rei's body.
    His body burned.
    Agni's marks, scarred in his skin.

    ...

    Plan A: Get in Romero. Kill Seth, the keeper of the keys where Rei is locked up. Evade all.

    Plan B: If spotted, use bow and kill Wolf first, working your way to Jake, the silent one.

    Plan C: If injured, drink health potions, speed potion, and zoom to Rei, get him.

    Optional: (Rei's Gear if Found) (Any items vital for survival)

    "Now I need to map out Romero, any exits, sewers, entrances, guard posts, prisoners" I thought.

    I came in Romero, mapping it out, while it was dark out, staying silent, running if caught.
    I mapped out half of the city, working on entrances, inside areas.
    I'm coming Rei, Shaun will pay.
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    Chapter 6: "U and S for Untold Stories"
    Entry #72
    "They'll die, with my help."
    I can kill them.
    I am Jake. I know the Untold Stories.
    It started here. Romero, a smaller town in the past. It thrived and was well.
    My name at the time was Dan. I changed my name to Jake a while on.
    The bandits came in town. Parents of the bandits in Romero today.
    I remember, when I was 12. They came and killed my parents.
    They destroyed all I knew.
    I was scared. I was angry.
    When I was 23, I found Shaun's dad, and killed him.


    This isn't the story though.
    It's about what lies ahead.
    The code.

    ...

    Shaun sat down in a chair and read an old letter.

    Dear Shaun,
    It's your Pops here. I am very injured. Someone stabbed me multiple times. I wasn't always a good person. I want you to know, never become like me. Watch over Charlotte.
    I love you. Your mother loves you. Find freedom. Save yourself from others. Become a good person.

    Sincerly,
    Pops.

    Shaun took the letter. And burned it.

    ...

    Kilo, wandering the streets with Wolf. They were searching for any sign of the "other one".
    "Wolf?"
    "Yes?"
    "I have a bad feeling here."
    "How so?"
    "I feel he is watching me."
    "He could."
    "Can we please leave?"
    "No Sis."
    "Why not?"
    "I'm here, I'm better than him. I am the strongest. I am your brother. I've killed many pe-"
    Ping.
    "WOLF!"
    Wolf collapsed, arrow in head.
    "No, no, no..."
    Kilo cried, over his body.

    ...

    Nate walked in the courtyard.
    Gentle breeze blowing his hair.
    He recited the last thing his uncle said to him.
    Nate, you know, the good guys never loose. Become a good guy.
    Uncle. Remember the last movie we watched.
    Yes.
    The enemy won.
    Yes, but barley.
    Uncle, I will become a bandit.
    No, ple-
    Swish.
    I killed him.

    ...

    Johnny was sleeping.
    His dream depicted his childhood.
    Pa?
    Yes?
    I hurt someone today.
    Who? How?
    Nate Glee. I told him to kill his uncle.
    Why..?
    He told me something.
    What is that?
    Nevermind.
    Please tell me.
    No. I'm leaving.
    Johnny...
    Goodbye.
    JOHNNY! YOU COME BACK!
    No.
    I pulled out my dagger from Nate.
    Swish.
    His papa, bleeding badly, on the living room floor, where he left a note to his mom.
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    Chapter 7: "Revenge"
    In the works. ~Ilikebubba

  2. small_arabian Emerald

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    Chapter 3: Complete.

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