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† Arc I - A Decade in Hell † Chapter Eight ... "Y'know what that means, Peter." A fine coincidence that Esau guessed right. "The undead surely heard...
I find that though there is a lot of description, there's too much telling than showing. I think your story could be much more entertaining if you...
[IMG] Jihad_Squad -=-=-=- The Jihad Squad is a clan specialized in irregular warfare. Irregular warfare includes guerrilla tactics, hit-and-runs...
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❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Eight ... Zehra came to with a gasp that washed her lungs with cold air. She laid damp and encumbered on a...
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❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Seven ... Zehra awoke with the clawing pain of a hollow stomach. She rose from her bedroll, grunting...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Six ... "Goody, goody. I think this is far enough," Murat sighed. Sweat ran down his sheened hair and...
Thanks! I've been trying to incorporate themes that aren't usually followed by a lot of stories. Like camaraderie, people having the...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Five "Pull faster, you idiot! Harder!" "What the hell do you think I'm doing? How about YOU push...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Four Murat breathed in and turned around. He stepped towards the shoddily fortified dining hall and as he...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Three . . . Zehra groped in the darkness for a treaded switch at her oil lamp as she awoke hours past...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter Two . . . "I won't charge you for taking no refuge at the shop," said Murat as he stuck a few gold...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Chapter One . . . How distant words could be, she thought as her horses passed under the gates of the...
❅ Arc II - Desolate Steppes ❅ Note: This is a separate story that takes place at the same time and same world as the previous arc. The official...
† Chapter Seven † . . . After two weeks, the sky was finally beginning to clear of the ash and break way for the light above like a morning...
† Chapter Six † . . . You're a clumsy man, he said. It doesn't take a reminder to tell me. How long have I been out cold? I had to reply. About...
† Chapter Four † . . . The chill came such that the cold connected from my spine to my neck in a jolt that might as well had stuck a needle...
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